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A duel beneath the falls.
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This is a relatively simple enough piece you have duel under a waterfall. What really brings the eyes attention to the two male figures in motion ,even though, they are so diminutive compared to their surrounding is the beautiful work you did with adding just enough lighting to some of the stones. I believe that it was the right choice to add lighting , also the burst of water right behind the figures and the small hints of red around them was a nice touch. I would have liked to see more detail on the stones behind the dueling men , however I understand that it may have distracted the viewer from the subject of the painting. Other than that, this painting is truly beautiful i'm a big fan of your work.
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It is great to see artwork in the frontpage of DeviantART that is not the typical plague created by Japanese influence.
I like anime and such, but really... overkill.

But I digress.
The first point that caught my attention was the roughness of the piece, from unusual weapons (when most people think duels, it's usually a swordfight or a western shootout) and apparent lack of protective garment, which leads to a figure of cavemen, rather intriguing.

The scenery is grandiose, waterfalls provide a sense of detachment, the deafening noise at the bottom of the falls pushes the two duelists to ultimate focus.

Their poses are great, the water splashes are done beautifully.
Some things detract from the piece, great elements that would be better used if they were two separate pieces. The waterfall splash against the rocks and the duelists' dark silhouette would be a great piece in it's own, as well as the sun on the rocks at the bottom has a dramatic effect that is somewhat lost given the size of the piece and the separation of elements, the warriors being under the shadow of the mountain/cliff.

Overall, it is a great piece, the brush strokes seem like the speed paint sort to me, rough coloring and details, smudged outlines, etc, all in all, it has a rough charm.
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:iconjosephhutchison:
josephhutchison Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2015
Stunning.
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:iconrealmwright:
Realmwright Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2014  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Wow. Such great action and movement in this piece.
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Archon89 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013
The composition of the picture is really awesome, very evocative! It gives a really cool sense of scale, and all the details are great! Nice work! :D
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:iconwildweasel339:
Wildweasel339 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
thank you :)
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:iconarchon89:
Archon89 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2013
You're welcome!
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:iconjuhupainting:
Juhupainting Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012   Digital Artist
Cool idea, love how they are overtowered by the waterfall!
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:iconfoolsightblind:
FoolSightBlind Featured By Owner Jul 25, 2012
Great,fun image, love the scale, and how 2 simple figures bring the whole story out
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Yenk Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This is a pretty epic piece of art/imagination. Gives me shivers! I just watched a certain Sherlock Holmes-based movie with an unexpectedly epic depiction of Holmes's epic death as recounted in the original Conan-Doylean books, and it has inspired my own art, but seeing this, I think I need to do my own duel between my own characters, 'cause THIS is quite inspiring. I have had a thing about waterfalls for some time.
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Zireael07 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is amazing!!!
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CLMac Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It really looks so grand, so epic and yet its a very simplistic piece and stylishly painted. I don't know if anyone has said this but, for me at least, my eyes are really drawn to the boulders/rocks in the foreground. In a way, they appear to be much more rendered than the rest of the painting. I'd like to keep focus on the figures in the midst of this large natural construct, however I can't help going back to those beautiful rocks! Other than that, I would say there is something about the curve of that cliff wall that doesn't seem natural - that was probably useless for me to say though D: Sorry. Anyway, I love the colors. Though there are more cool colors than warm colors, it still feels balanced to me. And the texture! Ah but I just love texture. It goes without saying that I love this
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Wildweasel339 Featured By Owner Jul 17, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Ah yes, the rocks are a bit distracting. I spent too much time noodling on them, and much less on the actual focal point. Thanks, good points!
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wytherwing Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2012
outstanding work! :thumbsup:
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:iconbloodmoonequinox:
BloodMoonEquinox Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Student General Artist
Excellent composition! :) It's very dynamic!
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:iconsuperhermit:
superhermit Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I really like the brush work on the waterfall!
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:icondazevisual:
DazeVisual Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Color temperature master over here haha! Looks legit
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:iconfulcrum45:
Fulcrum45 Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's awesome! Looks like a scene from a movie.
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:iconjamie-pmutt:
Jamie-pmutt Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
This is incredible.
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FictiveTriad Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
If i had a wider vocabulary, i would critique about how i like the setting and lighting very much!
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:iconmarcgosselin:
marcgosselin Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
Fantastic vantage point!!!
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:iconhiiragiblade12:
Hiiragiblade12 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
i thought of Kain and Cecil from FFIV when i saw this
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:iconsodaibou:
SodAibou Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
A fight scene beneath a waterfall.... Reminds me of Sherlock Holmes and James Moriarty's fight by the Reichenbach Falls in "The Final Problem".
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kineticdan Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Man that's great! Love the simplicity and the composition, bravo!
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:iconicecoldxx:
IceColdXx Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Nice! I didn't notice them at first but it blew me away when I did! Really, really great!
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:iconstarcru:
starcru Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
nice.
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DexterLexter Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i love it how you mix different levels of detail. the splashing water looks amazing and i can see how you used a rough brush to make it with a few well placed strokes. have you thought about adding another layer of bright reflections to the water? it would increase the drama, i think, and it seems physically possible (from the shadows i would judge that the water should be hit by direct light).
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lnfinityArts Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Wow. Great colors. Glad you made the duel not the main focus, but a silhouette in the BG
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:iconlzakaria:
LZakaria Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
oh wow! you can totally feel the action is his movements. awesome posturing! Same goes for the water--it's like another character :)
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:iconjuliano-pereira:
Juliano-Pereira Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Nice work!!
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amazingostriche Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Love the style! :D
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:iconhowlett66:
howlett66 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012   Traditional Artist
May I use this for a oil painting I might be doing in the future?I'm not reproducing it, but it's a nice idea :)
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Elucidator Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Yessssssssss.
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goldenhammer1 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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Dodo-Vogel Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
It's so good! The poses of the fighhters are just perfect <3

But in my opinion I think it doesn't fit that the persons are so clean and the BG so rough~
But maybe you intended that /D
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Kharon47 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Awesome. Love the place of the battle.
Great work.
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:iconikuzo32:
Ikuzo32 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
awesome work VERY AWESOME!!!
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:iconsolid-snake92:
solid-snake92 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Student General Artist
nice work man ;)
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:iconthiaminatenn:
ThiaminaTenn Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012   Digital Artist
love the dynamic between the duellists and this floating waterfall
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mdlillustration Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional General Artist
Very beatiful, I especially like how you have lined up the spears with the direction of the water and how one of the men is very off balance. I could be very wrong but I feel that the sunny rocks on the other side of the river could use a little bit more definition. In every other part of the painting I really like how you kept it very abstract. It adds to the immense scale and sense of movement. In other words Wow!
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Wildweasel339 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I think you may be right about the light on the other side. thanks! :)
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tomvanrheenen Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Very nice! Love the motion in the characters. Great work on the light, really adds a lot to the painting.
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Wildweasel339 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Thank you!
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ClefJ Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice everything on this one, sir. I love the use of space and good broken lighting.
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Wildweasel339 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Why thank you! :)
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CapitanaRecondita Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional
nice work :)
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Wildweasel339 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
thanks!!
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CapitanaRecondita Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional
you're welcome!
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Saurabhinator Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
love it!
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Wildweasel339 Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
:)
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